It is quite hard for me to understand what is going on in this comic strip. Is this a teaser? If it is, I cannot wait to see the full version because I think this is a combination of the genres suspense and horror. I suggest that you also put colors into it just so it would look more powerful and alive. It would really help your readers to be entertained and engaged because it will be easier for them to visualize the story of your comic strip.
It is a page to the next issue of my self-published comic series, 'Night Craft'. I agree with you about color and if all goes as planned, I'll start publishing in color with issue number eight, which hopefully will be out at the end of this year!
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